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Samabel
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OdoslaťPredmet: Poems   22.09.08 16:52

Today was a very strange day for me. You know, till now, I have had less than more inspiration (or maybe it was just doubt) to try to write a few lines of words in English. I knew, in the early morning, school would be boring this day and my mind thought about everything but school stuff. And suddenly I got a first thought in English words. Then I realized I were trying to rhyme those words. That was real surprise for me. I got to school and wrote those words to paper and then laptop. Lucky me, because I had this practical thing with me at school. cheers
So this is the final result. I´m not sure ... maybe I did a few mistakes, but ... at least I can declare that this is really my first try. lol!

Remembrances

Everytime I hear your voice,
every whisper, every noise,
heart is braver, soul is strong
and I can lightly carry on.

But that was the day before,
now, I feel lost more and more.
You are dead and I do not know,
should I cry or there´s a hope?

I see shadows full of lust,
they think I will break.
I just have to bury past,
my revenge will be made.



Six feet under

Six feet under there is the darkness,
six feet under light means poor madness,
six feet under you cannot move,
six feet under cold as a proof.

Six feet under you are lying,
six feet under and no crying,
six feet under hear the beast,
six feet under without peace.

Six feet under ringing the bells,
six feet under breaking all hells,
six feet under feel your breath,
six feet under no more death.

_________________

Feng Ming and Rong Tian. Someday, we will catch our happy ending...
Sekai-ichi Hatsukoi - Onodera Ritsu no Baai: Kore wa koi ja nai! Koi ja nai!
That place is engulfed in darkness. But that does in no way mean that there was never any light.PH
In bed my love has always been the sleep that rescued me by allowing me to dream.
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Poems   22.09.08 18:41

oh, Samabel Shocked that´s really beautiful first try!! i like it very much... 702 and this rhymes Wink really great 704
the first poem is so emotional and sad (but still amazing). And my voice trembled, while I was reading it... and the second one is beautiful too. It´s so "six feet under"... I don´t know. So dark...I´m fascinated. I just have no words. admirable

(sorry for the grammar 603)
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Poems   22.09.08 18:57

I told you should try it! I knew it would be great Laughing and I wasn´t wrong. This was just perfect I love it!!! It was really very well written and I am glad you decided to share it with us. It sounds incredibly good. The fist one is awesome. So sad but still with the hope, just wow and the second I loved the way you repeated the same words in the beginning!!! well, you did a great job and I can´t wait for your next poems or stories or whatever your inspiration brings to you!
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Poems   22.09.08 19:26

702 Thank you very much for your beautiful comments.
Six feet under - here my inspiration was Dean words form 4x01 and the first poem it was created without thinking... it just happened.
I´m glad that I could make something new, because last week I had no time to continue with my short story "All I have is fear" 603
Thanks again. 702 702

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Feng Ming and Rong Tian. Someday, we will catch our happy ending...
Sekai-ichi Hatsukoi - Onodera Ritsu no Baai: Kore wa koi ja nai! Koi ja nai!
That place is engulfed in darkness. But that does in no way mean that there was never any light.PH
In bed my love has always been the sleep that rescued me by allowing me to dream.
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Poems   18.10.08 15:48

So, it´s been a while and I have one more poem for you. I´ve tried to be very careful about choosing words, because I have this special idea about the meaning of poem. I hope I did it better than worse. Here it is ... thanks for reading and enjoy it.
(Sorry again for some grammatical mistakes, be patient with me, please Wink )

For love

The path of life leads you
you are walking without fear
but to do what you really want to
is like a fight with seas of tears.

Cannot confess to anyone
nobody will understand.
You have this invisible brand
what hides you from the sun.

To find what has been lost
is the mission without end.
Sweat and blood it cost
fire rains from your hands.

The victory is far away
where the hidden river flows.
Is right one of these or those?
Who knows? You are forced to pray.

To run without wasting
without a chance give up.
For what keeps you breathing
for love.

_________________

Feng Ming and Rong Tian. Someday, we will catch our happy ending...
Sekai-ichi Hatsukoi - Onodera Ritsu no Baai: Kore wa koi ja nai! Koi ja nai!
That place is engulfed in darkness. But that does in no way mean that there was never any light.PH
In bed my love has always been the sleep that rescued me by allowing me to dream.


Naposledy upravil Samabel dňa 24.10.08 21:22, celkom upravené 3 krát.
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Poems   18.10.08 16:58

Shocked holy s... that´s beautiful! totally amazing... I love it! it was sooo emotianal and sensual images were great! good job!
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Poems   19.10.08 22:04

Thank you for your words.
I found one bigger mistake but the word is now correct. lol!
i have to confess, that this poem is one of my favourite. I don´t know why, but it´s like I have better feeling about all of this.
So I am really happy you like it. 702

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Feng Ming and Rong Tian. Someday, we will catch our happy ending...
Sekai-ichi Hatsukoi - Onodera Ritsu no Baai: Kore wa koi ja nai! Koi ja nai!
That place is engulfed in darkness. But that does in no way mean that there was never any light.PH
In bed my love has always been the sleep that rescued me by allowing me to dream.
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Poems   16.08.09 20:30

Samabel I´m really amazed and impressed by your poems. Great job. Keep on writing ... cause you´re great at it Smile I also write in english, but I haven´t written a poem which would be so meaningful and would also have rhymes .... Well done
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