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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   05.03.08 21:18

Wow that´s big true. I agree with you.I´m glad lol!

You have a lot of fans ,here
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   05.03.08 21:24

thanks :shame: that's really nice


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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   05.03.08 21:24

d-f: oh, come on....I´m NOT SO bad. lol!
but that combination....It has something hidden inside .....

ok, ok....I´ll try to be nicer.

and I think...sometimes is torturing more impediment then really good thing. Very Happy

And what really matters is that I love everything what is involved by Supernatural Very Happy Very Happy ...and our brothers of course

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Sekai-ichi Hatsukoi - Onodera Ritsu no Baai: Kore wa koi ja nai! Koi ja nai!
That place is engulfed in darkness. But that does in no way mean that there was never any light.PH
In bed my love has always been the sleep that rescued me by allowing me to dream.
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   05.03.08 21:28

samabel: heh don't try that on me because i am same than you are so i know what torturing dean really mean to us but i have to say that sometimes it's too much and then it's not so good but when someone (like you ) do it right, then it's well AWESOME!
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   05.03.08 22:52

I am going here, because I think here is a new part and it isn´t here!
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   06.03.08 12:17

madlen: ow my sorry but i am working on it. today i am quite busy but hopefully i will be able to write next part and tonight it will be, well at least i hope so Wink
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   07.03.08 19:04

oh, you really know what torturing Dean means to us....that´s great

I do it right???.....thanks.... but is that really compliment 603 ... my torturing Dean deserve this compliment???...omg, I´m growing red 603 603 lol!
Poor Dean I should say

Ok....It won´t be better I´m afraid.......
no no no...I have to be good girl since now ...... I will be nice and polite and kind and warm-hearted .....yes warm-hearted
really....I ...(promise) lol! lol! 603 603

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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   07.03.08 22:57

whoaaaaaaaaaa oh my god that was jus perfect , like Jensen always say...just perfect yeah ...Missoury was apologize to him Dion..your story is better and better..... huh hurry up please..I need the next part....

citácia :
That I had a job here. I didn’t understand what it meant until now. I am supposed to save these brothers. And I knew that I can….

yeah yeah Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil she has just one job..save our brothers and then....she can die...You going to kill her, right????? cuz, you know...she's not important...some gir..tccc..she can die...
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   08.03.08 10:04

i am sorry, i know that i promise you next part few days ago, but i just didn't have inspiration. i couldn't find right words until today... so here next part...

I stood up.
“Are you staying here?” Sam was thoughtful so just murmured.
“Yeah.” I guess, that he had a lot in his mind, right now. I went inside and I saw Dean in a living room. However, Missouri wasn’t around. “So they are already finish.” I deduced. Perfect. I wanted to talk to Dean, too. I came in the room, where he was and sat next to him. He gave me suspicious look.
“What do you want?”
“Talk.” Was my simple answer.
“Okey, so you can start with who the hell are you?”
“Like I told your brother a little while ago, I am psychic. My name is Emma and I sometimes work with Missouri. I am not your enemy, Dean. I want to help you.” I knew that he didn’t believe me.
“Oh yeah and how you can help us?” I looked at him with very mysterious look and I saw how he shivered. Well, I can be quite scary, sometimes…
“Let’s say that maybe I know more that you would expect.” He was confused. Heck, who wouldn’t be? Maybe it’s time to be honest.
“First I want to apologize. I was curious and I broke my promise to Missouri. I told here that without her permission I wouldn’t read anybody but when you two came…The way how Missouri acted… I just couldn’t help myself and I read you and your brother. I know how you feel, Dean. I admire you for your strength. I don’t think I would be able to keep going after all what happened to you. But I also know what kind of person you are and what you’ve done… You don’t deserve to go to hell and even can’t from one perspective.”
“Can’t?” Now he totally didn’t get my point.
“Before I came to Missouri, even before I find out about my powers, I was very interested in supernatural world. I always believed that there is something else in this world, what we just don’t want to see. I spent hours and hours in library or on the Internet looking for the answers. Some information weren’t true, of course. But some…Some were very true. After I got my powers, my interest in supernatural things grow. I still didn’t know in what I can believe so I found some people which knew. Thanks them I found some other, ehm, things which knew even more. There is deal between two strongest powers in the earth.”
“Powers in the earth? Deal? What are you talking about?”
“You seriously don’t think that there is just hell, don’t you?”
“Huh?”
“There is heaven, too, Dean. The better place… But demons and angels have agreement that they would not be involved in humans’ lives. But as you can see, demons broke that deal long time ago. The angels, however, not. They used to say, that if they would do what they did, they wouldn’t be better and they are better, right? They are still here, invisible, but trying to help. They are with people in their last hours, they are there for you, when you are hurt. You may not see them or hear them but if you believe you can feel their presence. I know why you don’t believe, but you have to understand that it doesn’t mean that they don’t exist. Most of the people don’t believe in demons and you know they are real. What I am trying to say it’s that, there are rules. Hell and Heaven, they both want as many souls as possible, but some people just can’t go to the Heaven and some just can’t go the Hell. And well, Dean you are one of the good guys. You might not trust me, but I am not wrong in this one. You sacrifice yourself too many times for others. You helped too many people, saved too many lives…You know what it’s the straight ticket in Heaven? Self-sacrifice, Dean. The thing, which you do every day.” His mouth were open in disbelief, his eyes wide and I saw fear in them. Fear from hope, from faith. He was scared that if he trusted me, it will be just another lie. That it will not work and he can’t take the weight of knowing, that he is going to hell again. I felt sorry for him. He was unbelievable person, but he was hurt so badly…. Maybe I can help him live, but I am not sure if I can help him enjoying life. I whispered to his ear.
“Trust me. I will give you proof. I don’t led anybody hurt you again.” I didn’t wait for his response. I just quickly stood up and left the room. He stayed there with his thoughts and I knew exactly what I had to do. This world can be complicated, but fortunately, sometimes is also very simple.



SNlois: kill her? well, it's still an option and who knows? i am still not sure what i am gonna to do with her but like i said before, don't worry, no love interest for boys, just like rubi or bela.
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   09.03.08 13:51

affraid affraid affraid affraid affraid affraid god....now, I honestly can't find the word for this part.....it's impossible to find them...I just can'T describe this...it was sooooo....jjust

citácia :
You know what it’s the straight ticket in Heaven? Self-sacrifice, Dean. The thing, which you do every day.”

omg I love you..this is just beautiful..angels are real...and everything what you wrote about angels and demons and the deal between them..ou holy crab...that was just amazing..but, like I said, for this all part, i can't honestly find the words....
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   09.03.08 18:33

Yeaaahhhh!! I love this part!! Nice, really!
I don´t believe, that how you can write in english so amazing, that you aren´t English!!!
Please next part soon!!!

SNlois,
citácia :
she has just one job..save our brothers and then....she can die...You going to kill her, right????? cuz, you know...she's not important...some gir..tccc..she can die...
I am smiling, because you write this great!! After she save brothers she can die... Some bad luck.... Very Happy preferably...
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   09.03.08 18:35

Very nice, and very good work

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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   09.03.08 18:45

thanks i was inspired by Constantine movie in this part Very Happy heh so you want to kill the girl....well, that can be a problem because if you don't realize the strory is written from her point of view and if i kill her, there is no point of view, so there is no story.... but i will figure out this one for you, i promise Wink and again thanks for very nice words, i am really happy that you like it

btw SNlois: i have to say that you comment is really awesome. i love you too for posted it
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   09.03.08 19:06

Dion: ouuuuuuuuuuuu 603 Sorry you're not my type just kidding...
so you was inspired by the Constantine movie?? hej are you kidding?? Constantine is one of my favourite movies, cuz you know? keanu reeves 603 603 603 ehm...and by the way, I was thinking about what you wrote and I couldn't remember where i heard that...and this is it... constantine..ok, now I remember and I have to say, it's brilant you know, put this word or whatever into your story...it's really interesting so I thank you...again
Madlen: ou thank you...I just wrote the truth...or not??? hehehe of course it's the truth....
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   10.03.08 16:22

SNlois - yeahhh Very Happy I think too, you wrote only truth Very Happy Very Happy
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   10.03.08 17:48

Madlen: hahahhha rofl, so that was joke of this century but if you think so....ehm I know, I wrote before, that I wrote the truth, but only truth..hehe this is joke

ehm Dion, I need next part..please hurry up..please please please please please...holy crap my hand(why is not here injure smile?????)
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   10.03.08 22:36

hehe very funny so 'cause SNlois needs next part here is it. enjoy!

I just left the house when suddenly Missouri showed up before me from nowhere.
“Hey, where are you going?” Heh, yeah like I could answer that question truthfully without worrying her.
“So did you talk to him?” I better changed subject, I am master on doing that.
“Yeah, and I am very glad I did, thanks for telling me…You know all of that…it was stupid from me. When I talked to him… Man, his eyes were full of emotions, god I don’t understand how I could not see that. I also could read him during our conversation a little bit better and everything what I… he… felt… It was just…”
“Unbelievably heartbreaking?”
“Yeah, exactly.” She was truly impressed by him right now and I could just smile. At least, I’ve done one thing right already.
“I am sorry, Missouri. I would like to stay and talk to you about him, about what happened, but right now, I just don’t have time. I need to go but I will be back soon, I promise. See you later.” Then I quickly turned and started to run. I wasn’t running very long, fortunately the place, where I was hiding was pretty close to Missouri’s house. When I got view of the church I slowed down. I made it to the back of the church and found a place, where hopefully nobody could see me. I got out my knife and cut my right hand. I led my blood hit a holy ground and I whispered the words:
Sunguis ab gratuitus sacrificium, sacra terrestris et sucus ab mea arbitrium petam tui meatus. Archangelos ego vocatus ei!
It didn’t take long for a white light to showed up before me. The angel hide his wings from a people and if I didn’t know who he really is I would probably say that it’s just a random guy, however very good-looking. Nicolas had a short blond hair and his face looked like a face of little child. He was all dressed in white clothes- tracksuit actually with a T-shirt with short sleeves.
“Why did you call?” his voice was soft.
“Do you know about Dean Winchester’s deal?”
“Yes, I heard.”
“And?”
“And what?”
“You are not going to do anything about it? I thought there are rules.”
“There are rules, but he made a deal. It was very unpleasant for us to hear about it but we can’t help him.”
“You’re kidding. What do you mean by we can’t help him? Of course you can, you have to! It’s your job for god sake!”
“Calm down! I didn’t say we won’t do anything, we just can’t help him right now. He has to die and he has to go to the Hell. That was his deal but we can help him after that. We can put him out of the Hell and bring him with us to the Heaven. But that’s all what we can do.”
“No! There has to be something else. You can’t just led him die…after everything what he’s done…You just can’t!”
“I am sorry. I really am but there is just now way.”
“No, you just don’t want to see one. You can fight with them for him but it would be too dangerous right? You don’t want any trouble but guess what?! You are already in them! If you didn’t realize the demons don’t seem to be following the rules. How long it will take for them to broke them all and start war? Wasn’t it you who said to me, that for each life we should fight? Well, why you are not fighting then?”
“Watch your mouth! You know, that we all respect you and admire you for what you are doing, for what you can do but you have no right talk to me like that. We are doing our best to keep these people safe but sometimes we just can’t do anything. We won’t break our promises, we are not like them!”
“You have no right to talk to ME like that. I did for you and your kind more than anyone else. My whole family is dead because of it. Now I am asking you too save him and I don’t care how you’re gonna to do that but you will. I am willing make a deal if that’s the only way.
“Deal? What? No, are you crazy? I can’t do that.”
“You have no choice. I watched die too many good people and I can’t do it again. I won’t. So if you don’t want to help, alright, then you have to make a deal with me.”


the latin text means: blood from a free sacrifice, holy ground and the power of my will show you a way. Angel, i am invocating you!

next part soon, hopefully Wink
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   11.03.08 12:38

Ohh great! She would make deal for Dean! Nice part! Really! I like this. You write excelent!
How many part are you planning?
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   11.03.08 13:57

madlen: honestly i don't know how many parts it will be. i had this idea about story like this for a long time, you know with angels and so on, but when i started to write this one i thought it will be short like my all english stories but somehow i am not done yet Very Happy the best thing on writing this story is than even i don't know what's gonna happen. next part can be the last one Very Happy i just don't know. confused but don't worry i have a plan for whole story and it will be few more parts Very Happy

and i also want to thank you for your very kind words. that's what inspire me Wink when i read that someone likes what i wrote i just want to write more, so thank you very much


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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   11.03.08 16:47

ooooooooooooooooooooooo affraid affraid affraid affraid affraid HOLY CRAP 602
Dion I can't thank you enough your story in english, i mean this story is the best what you ever EVER wrote...well, it's my opinion, but I'm hell sure it's truth...you're just amazing writer this part was soo incredibly, great, amazing, and I don't know what else...

citácia :
“You have no right to talk to ME like that. I did for you and your kind more than anyone else. My whole family is dead because of it. Now I am asking you too save him and I don’t care how you’re gonna to do that but you will. I am willing make a deal if that’s the only way.

that's interesting...ehm I hope we find out, what this mean, soon
and this thing about the deal....like that SHE might be made a deal.....hey it's just awesome now I like her


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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   14.03.08 22:00

so thank you SNlois, your words are always so sweet unfortunately i kind of don't have inspiration for next part. i will try to write something during the weekend but i can't promise anything. i tried to write few times already, and it always ended up horrible with no sense. oh crap i am really praying for some ideas because if i soon won't figure it out i will probably kill myself
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   14.03.08 22:24

are you crazy??? your english is so good, I'm begrudging
(I hope that's is wrote right...) Rolling Eyes
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   14.03.08 22:42

heh thanks but i didn't have problem with english, i had a problem with the story. i don't know how to explain correctly what i have in my mind. i can't write it down in slovak either. anyway, thank you very much. i am not so sure about that and neither my english teacher but at least you like my english and that's enough for me Very Happy i can promise you that i will try to be just better and better.


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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   14.03.08 22:59

my last answer is for everyone Rolling Eyes
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   14.03.08 23:06

wow hups i am sorry if my comment sounds mean now but then i have to agree with sisel and say that your english guys is great! Wink 601 btw do you have any suggestions about this story? maybe it will help me get through this "dead" point in the story.

ow and sisel we also have english discussion ala free style in next topic- what's up. we can chat in english there. this is more for stories and poems and you know, fanfiction Wink heh but it's actually just me and nicol who posted something in english....
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