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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   01.03.08 22:43

madlen: thank you the next part will be hopefully soon Very Happy

SNlois: well i am dead right know i can't breathe, this is unbelievable how you can make me laugh at loud for so long time that i can't catch my breath but okey you make fun from me because i torture our boys??? that's so not fair!!! but i don't think, that i am gonna torture them in this story. this should be more about what they feel and also if you remeber how missouri made fun from dean, well i always wonder why she was so hard on him and this is my explonation Very Happy
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   01.03.08 22:49

no it was just example you know but I'm happy that makes you laugh yeah and I know that it's not fair, but...life isn't fair....

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if you remeber how missouri made fun from dean, well i always wonder why she was so hard on him and this is my explonation

hem this is really interesting.... yeah I'm waitng for the next part
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   01.03.08 23:05

well i know that it's kind of silly but i am little bit protective about dean in the show (not my stories ) so i was kind of mad at her you know. i guess that it had to be really hard for him to go back home and what she told him....well it was funny, but still. she is psychic so she should feel that he is not okey and maybe she did that because of it to make him think about something else, but i still want something more, so well here is it. don't kill me for that
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   01.03.08 23:15

Ok I understand...and I know it's not funny for Dean, it wasn't funny...and I'm happy that you want to write this...cause...yeah I need more, too... don'T worry I don't wanna kill you...not yet

and I never thought something bad about Dean....or I don't know how to explain or write but..you know...I'm protective about Dean too....seriously..so I don't know if I write somethnig bad or silly or stupid..I'm sorry about that..cause I dont meant(minulej čas od mean, maybe:smiling: ) like that ..... :shame: :shame:
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   01.03.08 23:25

no it's okey and i am very happy that you feel it the same way because i started ask myself if i am not crazy but for me it just didn't fit right on story you know that things what missoury said... and i was totally okey with your previous comment so i don't know what you meant with
SNlois- the clown of our private show wrote:
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.so I don't know if I write somethnig bad or silly or stupid..I'm sorry about that..cause I dont meant like that .....

and thanks that you don't want to kill me Very Happy
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   01.03.08 23:33

tha clown of our private show jeez not today I'M dead

yeah I deffinitely in the same way like you..and you know ..what I wrote....don't take me seriously ...I didn't see the point of what you wrote before...I'm stupid I know..I thought it's clear

so yeah I'm in the same way and what missoury said Dean..it was unbelievable for me too... Suspect Suspect Suspect
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   01.03.08 23:37

heh okey then Very Happy i am actually shocked that you thinks too. this is amazing that we think about same stuff well hopefully you will like my explonation. it's nothing extra and also i sort of like missouri so she will be still good Very Happy just she will look a little bit stupid Very Happy gee i am agoin in the writing mood no, please, god i can't go write next part now, it's too late
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   02.03.08 15:27

okey here is the next part. enjoy Wink

I walked into the kitchen and saw Missouri standing next to the window. “Why?” I simply asked. She didn’t understand what I meant. “Why what?” I couldn’t believe that she don’t get it. “Why are you so hard on that man? He didn’t deserve what you are putting on him. Don’t you think that he’s already been through enough? That he doesn’t need you to shout at him?” Missouri stayed quit for a while and looked embarrassed. I didn’t want to read her but again I couldn’t help myself and I broke my other promise. When I found out why she was doing it, I started laugh. I didn’t mean it but it was just so funny and silly in the same time. “You can’t read him.” I said knowingly. “He is burring his feeling to deep inside him that you can’t read him. All what you are sensing from him are just his not important thought, which he doesn’t protect.” I stared at in disbelief. She didn’t know that. She thought that all what that man can think of is food or hot chicks. “How do you know?” she asked me. “Did you read them or me?”
“Yeah Missouri I did. I read you both. But I did because I saw it before. That pain in his eyes. He is broken, Missouri and what you said to him… Well, I was confused. I didn’t understand how can you not see that? You are the psychic right? You are supposed to see inside him so I wanted to know why are you doing it? I also thought that I might be wrong and I missed something so I read them first. But that just confirm me about what I’ve thought before so then I read you. And I have to tell you that however, I truly admire you, I am disappointing right now. Didn’t you tell me that sometimes you don’t need special powers to be able to read people? So how could you be so blind?” Missouri looked surprised but then I saw in her eyes regret. “I am sorry I just trusted my powers too much and when I couldn’t see anything else in him I just thought that there is nothing else in him. I won’t do it again. I will be ore careful but how could you read him when I couldn’t?” “Well, I am a little stronger than I told you but it’s not me who you should be apologizing to.” Missouri nodded and we both slowly left kitchen and went back to the living room. Boys were still that, quietly sitting on the sofa. When we entered the room they looked at us with a curiosity in their eyes. Then Missouri started to talk. I just smiled when I saw how big effect it had on the young man. Sometimes are words stronger than we think…


now i can promise you that in the next part will be boys
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   02.03.08 17:54

oh, thank again ...this time for next chapter........ Boys in next chapter.....I´m looking forward to so much..... this story is really great.... amazing... And in English it sounds so cool.... thanks

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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   02.03.08 18:16

Yeah that's what I am talking about..... a litlle bit stupid Missouri..ok I got it
but it's just great and you better and better . and this part was sooooo great..juhuuu so now I like everything in your story...hmm maybe I love everything in your story
you know....Missoury-finally..it's good explanation, really...I see, we have the same thoughts and ideas...I luv it
the girl-yeah..now I like her
Dean and Sam - no coment
citácia :
now i can promise you that in the next part will be boys


are you sure??
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   02.03.08 18:25

Nice, really really amazing! You write perfect her thought about boys. I like it Very Happy Thank you. I am enjoying to next part with boys
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   02.03.08 19:01

thank you thank you thank you for really nice words and yeah i am sure that in next chapter will be boys
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   02.03.08 19:11

you´re sure Shocked doors doors
I´m just kidding ....I´m happy!!!!......... boys go go go!!!

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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   02.03.08 21:44

Samabel napísal:
you´re sure Shocked doors doors
I´m just kidding ....I´m happy!!!!......... boys go go go!!!
heeeeeej it was my joke ok ok double joke....why not
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   04.03.08 17:23

okey next part and again, please don't kill me for that girl...i am not planning to make her a love interests for one of our brothers. she just can help them with that deal....

Dean couldn’t believe his ears. What was just happening? Was Missouri saying sorry to him? What for? Then his eyes met mine and his smile was charming. He was asking himself why Missouri hates him so much and now…He was just pleased with what he heard. However, the younger one, Sam, looked a little bit confused.
“Hey, Sam would you like to go to the garden? It’s a beautiful day and we can give them some time. They probably should talk about something.” I said. Sam’s eyes were wide but he accepted my suggestion and we both slowly walked out of the room. When we came to the garden, I sat on the bench and wait for Sam to join me. It didn’t take long and we were both sitting there watching a wonderful nature around us. It was really nice day.
“So who are you?” started Sam. Well, I guess that I should expect that question. Missouri didn’t say them much about me. Actually, she said them almost nothing.
“My name is Emma and I have similar abilities as Missouri has.”
“So you are mind reader?” I laughed.
“Well, you can say that, too but I prefer psychic.” I smiled at him. He was so completely different than his brother. He was open and wanted to talk about what’s bothering him. His big warm brown eyes looked so amazing and his sweet smile….I was totally fascinated about him. Thanks the fact, that I read him, I know how kind he is, how much pain he had to get through but he still fights for us, still trying to save innocent people and I had to just admire him. Heck, what was not to admire about him?
“Sam I want to ask you something.” I knew that I will probably regret this but when I found out about that deal I had to know something.
“That deal, what your brother made, do you believe in way out?” These feelings were to unclear when I read him and I wanted to know. I needed to know.
“I guess so.” He said. However, I didn’t miss the pain in his eyes.
“But?” I pushed and hoped that not to much.
Sam stayed quiet for a while but then answered my question with a little shaky voice.
“I am just not sure how much it will cost to break that deal.”
“Oh…Then how much are you ready to pay?” I was nervous. I had one idea but first I needed to make some things clear, to be sure about them. Sam’s voice was deeper this time and it sounded more confident.
“I would do anything for him. Anything.” And I knew he would but it scared me a little. Sam was ready to try everything to save his brother and I just couldn’t led that happened. For his brother’s sake, for his sake and for my sake too. When I first came to Missouri, I had this feeling that I should be here. That I had a job here. I didn’t understand what it meant until now. I am supposed to save these brothers. And I knew that I can….
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   04.03.08 18:19

Oh next part great!!
You write really nice Her thought about Sammy Amazing!! Next part soon please!!
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   04.03.08 19:23

Next chapter!!!
thank you very much..... I´m really glad you share your stories in English with us ...
great

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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   04.03.08 19:47

wow thanks guys, i will try to write next chapter as soon as possible. i am glad, that you like it Wink
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   04.03.08 19:51

and we are glad that you WRITE it Very Happy

some ideas for things I can look forward to in next chapter? :shame:

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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   04.03.08 20:11

heh you want spoiler right? well okey
in next chapter i would like to have a dialogue with Dean and that's all what i'm gonna to say 601
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   04.03.08 20:14

Yeh, I´m spoilt girl lol! ....so I want to spoiler lol!
Dean! ....oh thanks, that is very impressive spoiler information lol! .... especially for me very impressive lol!

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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   04.03.08 23:42

Hello all.Buenos noches lol!

My English is very bad because ,I don´t know why? lol!

I´m glad that,I´m here.That´s Fanfiction and Fanfiction is very interesting

and I´m happy that you are very clever writers. cheers
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   05.03.08 9:10

samabel: i knew it all what you need to hear is Dean and if there is also torture, it's the best combination for you but i am sorry in this story no torturing (at least not yet, but who knows?) it will be just nice talk between him and Emma.

Kaja: and we are happy that you are very clever readers Very Happy it's really nice that you like my stories because they are not 100% correct in English so it's good that you can still undestand Wink
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   05.03.08 21:09

Dion:Thank you ,I´m happy too.That´s not problem ,because your English

is very good and very sympatic for me.I don´t like very hard English.And

this English is angel
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OdoslaťPredmet: Re: Fanfiction   05.03.08 21:14

so my english is great right? heh i wish my english teacher thought so too but yeah, you know i am still slovak girl so i am not gonna write something too hard Wink just for relaxing. i don't want you read my stories with vocabulary in other hand because then it's just not fun .... it's torturing and heck who wants that? nobody and i want you to read my stories with pleasure and not struggle with understanding so it's really nett to hear that you like it and that you don't have a problem with reading it


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